The
rainforest is known for its beauty and mysterious landscape. It could hold the
cure to cancer, provides 20% of our oxygen, holds one fifth of the world’s
fresh water, and is home to 50% of the worlds plants and animals, and yet we
are destroying it at a rate of 1.5 acres a second (Rainforest). Something the earth holds dear, could soon be
gone forever.
The
rainforest only covers 2% of Earth’s surface, but is an essential resource and
home to half of the plant and animal species including Tigers, Lemurs, sloths
and many other precious species that we know and cherish. It is very densely populated; according to
nature.com, “A typical four-square-mile patch of
rainforest contains as many as 1,500 flowering plants, 750 species of trees,
400 species of birds and 150 species of butterflies”(Rainforest 12). Almost 4 miles of rainforest gets cut down
daily, and many innocent animals lose their homes as we lose our resources.
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As you probably know, the rainforest has one
of the most diverse climates and many of its exotic animals are endangered or in
threat of becoming endangered. According
to rain-tree.com, “Nearly half of the world's species of plants, animals and
microorganisms will be destroyed or severely threatened over the next quarter
century due to rainforest deforestation” (Rainforest Facts par 4). If we do not stop deforestation soon, we
might loose some of earth’s most amazing animals.
Imagine
growing up in a world without these animals.
My 5-year old sister loves tigers.
She runs around the house, pretending she is in a rainforest and roars
like a tiger hunting its prey. It is the
most adorable thing you will ever see.
If we cannot put an end to the destruction of the rainforest, these
kinds of experiences may disappear forever.
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In
addition to what we have already discovered in the rainforest, there is still
much to be explored in these diverse jungle. According to Rainforest facts, “25% of Western pharmaceuticals are derived
from rainforest ingredients, less than 1% of these tropical trees and plants
have been tested by scientists”(Rainforest facts). We could lose a fourth of the current
medicines that we depend on and 99/100 potential sources that have yet to be
discovered. We might be destroying a
cure for cancer or a vaccine for HIV. The damage being done to the rainforest
could mirror the damage we will do to our own society as a consequence.
As if destroying homes and wiping out medicinal sources wasn’t bad
enough, we are also wiping out an essential oxygen, fresh water and food
source. A fifth of our drinking water is
found in the rainforest (Rainforest 12).
Water is essential for survival, and we cannot afford to limit its
availability. The rainforest also produces
20% of the world’s oxygen. Like water,
oxygen is pretty essential for survival. After all, we all need to breath! Simply
the understanding of the loss of water and oxygen we are sacrificing by
destroying earth’s rainforest, should be enough to end deforestation forever.
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"Rainforest" Rainforest Facts. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Dec. 2013.
"Rainforests Facts." Rainforests Facts. The Nature Conservancy, 2013. Web. 01 Dec. 2013.



I like your title and think it could have also served two purposes. If you changed “peace” to piece, it might be able to help your article. I believe your purpose is to show the danger in what we are doing to the rainforest and get this point across to the reader. You have a strong use of pathos at the end the article when you state, “As if destroying homes and wiping out medicinal sources wasn’t bad enough” (Telatko par. 6). This evokes the reader’s emotion to care for what is going on. Also, the use of logos is great throughout the structure of the article. You start in the first paragraph with a specific severity about the destruction of the rain forest and every paragraph after that reinforces this same idea. It is logical to drive home the point so that the reader understands it. I think you did establish your persuasive purpose through your use of rhetorical strategies. I think it would help your argument if you shortened your paragraphs. It would make the article easier to read and quicker to get through. The reader will be looking at the same amount but they will feel like it is less.
ReplyDeleteTelatko, Colette. “Peace Out, Rainforest.” Ain’t No Smoggy Smoke on Rocky Top.1 December 2013. Web 2 December 2013.
You have done a good job with this piece. There was a great use of pathos in the fourth paragraph when talking about how your sister loves to run around pretending to be a tiger. This really hit some emotions because my cousins also dress up as animals and pretend to be them. Also, the use of statistics and quoting and paraphrasing sources showed that you knew what you were talking about and showed that you did some research on this topic. The use of the quote you used in paragraph 2 about how many different species of animals and plants are in the forest was incorporated nicely, and had a good persuasive purpose. I believe you have accomplished your persuasive purpose. The use of pictures helps capture a sense of what you are attempting to get across. One thing I would have done differently is to not use all of the same information in your introduction and conclusion. It seemed repetitive. Other than this, I believe this was a great piece.
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