Nick
Gerard
Ms.
Jacqueline Kerr
English
101 section 38
3
December 2013
The Evolution of the Solution to Pollution
The real solution to climate change
is found in the minds of those who still want to work for their place in this
world. The real solution to climate change lies within the minds of young
conservatives.
We as a nation must abandon the idea
that increasing the size of the federal government will solve our problems. We
cannot add a carbon tax to the already enormous tax-code.
In order to solve climate change we
must…
1.
Reform the
American tax code
2. Create a carbon tax that does not increase federal
revenue
3. Reach international agreements on this issue
First when examining the United
States tax-code it is easy to see how Middle America ends up paying through the
nose in taxes. Large companies hire experts who find loopholes in the tax code
resulting in it being very difficult to increase that tax revenue. (“Simplify
the Tax Code” par 2) This ultimately makes the middle class pay extremely high
taxes. Adding a carbon tax to this broken system would only be detrimental to
America.
Photo courtesy of Christian Science Monito
Second a carbon tax needs to be purposed
that does not increase federal revenue. This tax would be created to help stop
further damage to the planet and is not intended to increase revenue. (“How to Tax
Carbon” par 5) This carbon tax would replace other taxes within the tax
code, perhaps the income tax. The income tax already takes away incentive to
work and conflicts with the core American ideal of hard work being greatly
rewarded. A carbon tax would essentially tax any business releasing
unsatisfactory carbon emissions, this tax would be high enough to force
companies to switch to alternative energy sources and be more environmentally
friendly.
Photo courtesy of Real World Libertarian
Third, order for climate change to
be solved it must be addressed as a serious problem on an international level.
After the United States adopts this tax and successfully lowers its carbon
emissions we must set the standard for industrial pollution. We as a nation must
urge other countries around the world to follow us in our pursuit of a cleaner
world, to solve climate change quickly. The U.S. would need to use economic
sanctions on any country resisting the idea of environmentally friendly change.
If our generation wants to change the amount of carbon humans emit into the
atmosphere we must change lifestyles and make climate change priority one on an
international level.
Mankind and Climate Change by Daniel Kurtzman
These simple steps can solve one of
the greatest problems our world has ever faced. Although each step will take
tremendous work on many levels of government and international collaboration it
can be done. Time and time again the American will to improve society ends up
improving society. The United States has the power to lead on the issue of
climate change and help push people to live lives that are sensitive to the
world around them.
Work Cited
Moylan, Andrew. “How to
Tax Carbon.” American Conservative. Environmental Protection Agency, 2013. Web. 31 Oct. 2013.
Buchanan,
Vern. “Simplify The Tax Code.” Tampa Bay
Times. 1 June 2013. Web. 13 November 2013.



I thought your paper started off with a clever title to begin with, and the introduction paragraph was very concise. You only used a few sentences and got right to the point of what you wanted to say, and then elaborated on that very well throughout the blog. You did a very good job with your logos appeal as well. The facts and ideas that you suggested to help climate change in a conservative way were all very thought out and reasonable. I would suggest however, that you work more on pathos and ethos in this piece. Some of it read a little more like an academic paper and it didn't feel like you were trying to have a simple conversation with the reader. You also needed maybe another quote in there to help with the ethos.
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