Lets
get one thing straight. Climate change is real. The amount of evidence
supporting climate change is overwhelming. The surplus of extreme weather in
recent months is no coincidence. The early believers of climate change knew
this would happen if we continued on the path we did. The real question
surrounding climate change now is what are we going to do to fix it.
The
problem with fixing climate change is that a large part of our economy revolves
around oil and gas. The Center of Automotive Research found that one in ten
jobs in the United States is supported through the automotive industry (Rampell
3). If we are going to slow climate change we must shift our economic focus to a cleaner industry.
| courtesy of autoallience.com |
The
best way to make this transition is through the soultuions being proposed by
former congressman Bob Inglis. In his 12 years in Congress, Inglis was a member
of the House Scientific Committee, Chairman of the Research Subcommittee, and
Ranking member of the Energy and Environment Subcommittee (“Our Leaders”). His
conservative approach is perfect for the current circumstances of our economy
and environment.
Inglis’s
first solution to slowing climate change is through a carbon tax paired with an
income tax cut (“Our Leaders”). A carbon tax would force big polluters to pay
money to government based on the amount of carbon dioxide they put into the
air. It’s about time we hold the oil and gas companies accountable (“Our
Leaders”). It can be expected the oil and gas companies would shift their
burden from a carbon tax to the consumer in the form of higher gas prices (Poterba
11). While this may seem like a bad thing, its really not. Higher gas prices
create need for more efficient cars (11). Nobody would want to drive around a gas-guzzler
if gas was five dollars per gallon. People need more incentives like this to
live efficiently.
The
other big solution being proposed by Inglis is cutting subsides on oil and gas
companies (“Our Leaders”). For those of you who don’t know, subsides are
financial contributions by a government in exchange for some type of benefit
(Pershing and Mackenzie 132). The most common subsidies talked about are the
ones with the oil companies in which we give oil and gas companies money in
exchange for lower gas prices (132). By doing this, we are part of the problem. It’s hard to promote clean energy
if we are giving money to the competitors. Lets cut the subsidies and let the higher
gas prices promote clean energy for us.
While
Inglis’s solutions may seem harsh on the people, they are our best bet for
slowing climate change. It is clear our current plan doesn’t appear working to
slow climate change fast enough. It’s going to take bold ideas like Inglis’s to
slow climate change.
Inglis, Bob. "Our Leaders." Energy and
Enterprise Initiative About EEI Comments. N.p.,
n.d. Web. 14 Nov. 2013.
Pershing,
Jonathan, and Jim Mackezie. “Removing Subsidies.” n.b. Web. 12 March 2005
Poterba, James. “Tax Policy To Combat Global Warming.” Working paper No. 3649.
National Bureau of Economic Research. Web. 1 April 2002.
Rampell, Catherine. "How Many Jobs Depend on the Big
Three?" Economix How Many
Jobs Depend on the Big Three Comments. New York Times, 17 Nov. 2008. Web. 26
Nov. 2013.
First off, this was a really good piece. I thought the title was good and was included very well throughout the post. I also really liked your opening paragraph. It was very strait and to the point. It made me want to read more about your thoughts toward climate change. You did a really good job transitioning from your opener to introducing what you think is our "Best Bet" with this sentence, " The best way to make this transition is through the solutions being proposed by former congressman Bob Inglis"(Breier 3). You appealed to your Ethos by building up Bob Ingles as a credible source and his plan, that you think is the best bet, as plausible. You appealed to logos in the beginning paragraph by hitting the reader with the statement “climate change is real” (Breier 1), and saying that there is a ton of evidence to support it. These helped you prove your persuasive purpose that Ingles’ plan is our best bet. Your paragraphs were a little bit long and hard to get though, including more pictures and breaking it into more paragraphs would help you demonstrate your point to a larger audience. I also think it would be more effective if you included more personal opinion in you piece, or even a personal story to carry on the theme from your introduction throughout the piece.
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